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Comments for 'Neu Haven: Chapter One'



Blue Jaguar
11:15 pm | January 12, 2004
yes, the Covenant ship was just a small scout ship, no real chance against a well armed Frigate. Sorry for the bad explanations, I guess I should have mentioned that it was 100 years earlier, i'll try and clean some stuff up in the next chapter.
FOrunnER
2:51 am | January 9, 2004
If you had read the dates you would know that this story dosn't take place in 2552, or even 2525 (when the Covenant glassed harvest), it takes place in 2418 which is nearly 100 years before that, so of course the weapons mentioned are more primitive than the ones now.

Any way, good story, but the Covenant ship seemed a little to easy to beat.
newboob
8:35 pm | January 6, 2004
Yeah, that was pretty damn good, but what the hell is going on? Is this after the Human-Covenant War, Or before, or during, or what? And on the destroyer, you said that it fired Crossbow missiles, and 180mm shells, and the fighters were "Katanas". So are these more advanced or less advanced than MAC's, Archers, and Longswords? Kinda confusing, but very well written. Can't say anything about the story itself, because I don't quite get it yet, but if you'd explain it some i'd get it and enjoy it.
Mastergrunt
3:15 pm | January 6, 2004
This story is okay although I got a little confused at the beginning
Helljumper
4:34 am | January 6, 2004
good one


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