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Comments for 'ROUND-THINGIE 2: The Sequel'



Matt
12:20 pm | January 27, 2003
lol, riddelin withdrawel or not, i like complements. however undeserved they may be.

El Diablo, youve taken some intrest to the writing, or esle you have nothing better to do. i realy need imput from people to continue, and i'd be intrested in your opinions of how i should continue. Or if i should continue Pilots of Autumn instead.
el_halo_diablo
7:02 pm | January 25, 2003
heh, someone forgot to take their riddelin this morning.
Ender
6:40 pm | January 25, 2003
YOUR STORY IS THE BEST THING EVER MADE!!!!!! FORGET THAT REBIRTH SERIES WHEN I CAN NOW READ ROUND-THINGY!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!
el_halo_diablo
11:48 pm | January 24, 2003
well...I just thin for some reason, that your humor is a little off-balance. But thats probably just me. :)
Matt
2:24 am | January 24, 2003
I'm trying to find a medium. My best work is the Pilots of Autumn series, so i can do good.

A problem witht he first round thingie is while humorous, i got so excited that i typed really fast and laughed while doing it. the result was funny, but extremly painfull to look at.

I toned it down maybe a little too much, ill keep trying to strike a balance. You guys just tell me what humor you think is funny, and which parts are dumb, and ill modify.
krazykow66
10:21 pm | January 23, 2003
I liked it. It wasn't as good as the first (humor-wise) becuase it seemed like some material was reused. It was still funny though. Keep the stupid stuff in there, not all jokes have to make sense to be funny.
el_halo_diablo
9:04 pm | January 23, 2003
I found the Covenant leader Tony blair thing to be very funny and originall. Liek the one before, it had parts that were funny, but there were still parts that were kinda...dumb. Keep it up man, I like seeing competition in comedy. Hope to see more. :)
el_halo_diablo
8:55 pm | January 23, 2003
oh God we have to go through this AGAIN?! Well, I'll read it, the last one did have some funny parts in it...


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