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Comments for 'Attack on ERISTOCK Part 14: Only the Strong' |
xitWOUND117
4:23 pm | November 6, 2003
shit. it posted it twice. dammit, i'm fuckin spamming on my own goddamn story.
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xitWOUND117
3:54 pm | November 6, 2003
also, just because i didn't describe the carriers doesn't mean they didn't show up. but i see what you mean. they will run into carriers.
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xitWOUND117
3:54 pm | November 6, 2003
also, just because i didn't describe the carriers doesn't mean they didn't show up. but i see what you mean. they will run into carriers.
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xitWOUND117
3:51 pm | November 6, 2003
i am fully and totally aware of the fact that there were no carrier forms, and i know how they are made. i just thought it wasn't the right time to introduce them to the SPARTAN III's. also, i usually start a new sentence when someone speaks, if i didn't it was by accident. thanks for reading.
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FOrunnER
4:34 am | November 6, 2003
Great story xitWOUND117, very good. I paticularly liked the scene when the Flood spore bursted out of the Grunts body, that gave me a really vivid picture. But just one thing I would like to add: you didnt have any carrier forms, thats what Grunts and Jackals become when there infected, so there should be alot of them. And also, start a new scentence when somebody speaks. Other than that, I cant find anything to complain about.
10/10
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xitWOUND117
3:38 pm | November 5, 2003
Sergeant B, i'm sorry i wasn't at the fanfic contest over at Raider's Company. i was gone for 3 days, so i was not able to participate.
Anonymous: wow. usually you have a bunch of tips. well, thanks for the praise. glad to know you are eagerly awaiting it.
by the way everybody, i've been thinking about the ending the entire time i've been writing this, and i can only come up with one solution. the ending is drawing near, so be prepared. the ending will be a little wierd, especially if you don't like my "loyal" and "unloyal" Flood. it's been fun writing this, but it will end very soon. it probably will not go on past the end of November, if not a lot sooner.
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Anonymous
5:35 am | November 5, 2003
Not much to say really. Excellent as usual, and I'm waiting eagerly for the next installment.
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Sergeant B
2:39 am | November 5, 2003
Geez. NO one has posted anything here. Great story xitWOUND117. Very good. And where were you during the event. NO one came. Only CovieKilla posted so I guess he one. I don't know. Well, more activity at Raider's Company is needed. People join Raider's Company PLEASE!!
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