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Comments for 'Tides of Desturction (Part 5, The Hook and the Fish)' |
Awacar
8:55 am | January 2, 2004
someone has figured out where six of the keys on the keyboard are. +the space bar, whoa!
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your gay
5:44 am | December 30, 2003
your gay
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CoLd BlooDed
12:33 pm | December 28, 2003
Cool thanks teemus, you always have been one to read my stories.
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teemus
10:59 pm | December 27, 2003
Hmmm...that could work for my next seris. Thanks for the help. By the way, i read your first story in you sequal(I think thats how you spell it)for FfNT. I left a post, check it out.
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CoLd BlooDed
5:41 am | December 27, 2003
Woops....
My suggestion is a bit late...
Oh ya, teemus, I'm making a new series called "Forced Betrayal", its about an Elite sentenced to death after not being able to take New Tatley. He escapes with some other Covenant on some ships (Seraph Fighters) and fights the Covenant secretly, if you want to you can read that series when I post it.
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teemus
5:37 am | December 27, 2003
Yup. I did get the 10th mountain from that movie. I posted my next story today, it might not be up to standard becasue I couldnt think of what to write.
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CoLd BlooDed
5:33 am | December 27, 2003
Hmmmm....Busted!
I just rented Black Hawk Down, and 10th Mountain is the name of the part of the army in the movie.
Haha is that where you got the idea? I don't care, I'm just asking.
Damn that was a good movie...
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CoLd BlooDed
5:33 am | December 27, 2003
Just get the Infantry to move up taking heavy (or light, up to you) casualties as they are bombarded by the Ghosts, maybe you should add some Shades in the battle too firing from the outpost.
Then when they get to the designated spot, move up the 10th Mountain continue the story from whatever you want it to be....
Just a suggestion.
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teemus
3:56 am | December 27, 2003
Im having a writers block and cant think of what to write for my next story. So far I have about 2 paragraphs and the last sentence is, "Forward infantry move up while the 10th mountain provides cover."
Does anybody have any ideas. I would really apriciate it.
teemus
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teemus
1:48 am | December 27, 2003
thanks for the post guys. It took me a while to get the code.
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CoLd BlooDed
11:05 pm | December 26, 2003
Lol thanks for the acknowledgement!
Great chapter, but one thing....
If you want to indent on the story, just go [indent], don't space after and it makes the story look less untidy.
Keep it up teemus, good work.
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Awacar
9:22 am | December 26, 2003
You've made progress, much progress, both in terms of writing and the perfect use of code. For us that don't desire action to see the good story, this was the best chapter in your series.
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