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Comments for 'On A Pale Horse: Enough Dead Heroes' |
Lone Wolf 4001
10:24 pm | July 7, 2003
I am continueing my series BF 2552, and I wanted to address some things I know I am spaming but here it goes
1st I know the title sounds like a video game, it's supposed to
2nd It's part of a series, don't rip it until you read the others
3rd Looking back to Move forward is the first in the series
4th He is a First Lieutenant Because he wnet through OCS,
5th I am in the Air Force, I know this
6th Sorry for takeing up space, it was a good story
7th known misteaks, His homeworld wasn't Solace, although the first says it is, finally I don't know how to indent.
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Lone Wolf 4001
10:24 pm | July 7, 2003
I am continueing my series BF 2552, and I wanted to address some things I know I am spaming but here it goes
1st I know the title sounds like a video game, it's supposed to
2nd It's part of a series, don't rip it until you read the others
3rd Looking back to Move forward is the first in the series
4th He is a First Lieutenant Because he wnet through OCS,
5th I am in the Air Force, I know this
6th Sorry for takeing up space, it was a good story
7th known misteaks, His homeworld wasn't Solace, although the first says it is, finally I don't know how to indent.
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Diamond Dog
8:02 pm | July 7, 2003
Dr. Halsey? or Mendez. Not sure. Keep up the good work.
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Silent Hunter
4:17 pm | July 7, 2003
You'll just have to wait...*grins evilly*
Clues:
1) was in The Fall of Reach
2) The Chief knows him/her
3) had a lot to do with the SPARTANs
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Don Q
2:06 pm | July 7, 2003
I think it was really good. The end makes me a little anxious but i'll just have to wait!. By the way who the hekk is this old friend? Is ti someone from H-01, or Reach?
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Silent Hunter
12:12 pm | July 7, 2003
As for the injured human...let's just say he's an old friend...;)
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Silent Hunter
12:09 pm | July 7, 2003
It was from the covenant's point of veiw, so the chief would be "it", and Loma would be "he"
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Jamirus99
11:02 am | July 7, 2003
The fight with Loma disappointed me- it was confusing and not at all clear as to who "he" was. Stop using ambiguious pronouns, and I'll look forward to the next installment. I look forward to the next chapter, and finding out who that damn injured human is ;)
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