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 Comments for 'The Siege of Zion Base; Part One: Mission - Chapter 4' |  
 
 
		
			| Scim to MC's Cousin 1:43 am | February 15, 2004
 Well you have to realize that part one is all back story.  I have to set up for the main story plots to be established correctly otherwise... what happens?  Nothing really. I can't jump right into the action in this particular story.  The main fruit of this plot really starts to get good in the second part and throughout the next few chapters.
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			| MC's Cousin 1:03 am | February 15, 2004
 I will apologize for not reading the stories in their proper order.  I get a wierd sort of view from reading them backwards.  Nice.  Like the storyline.  I like how you lead up to the next story, but things seem to go by pretty fast.  No read "in depth" fighting.  that's just fine of it's your style, and I wouldn't just switch to that kind of writing either.
 
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