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Comments for 'The Gods of War: Spartan III's:Enter the Juggernaut' |
343 Salty Beans
12:20 am | June 24, 2004
I think the identification process for Ronay was off. They take a sample of DNA, remember? It's in H:tF. But still good story.
343SB
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Wiley
5:36 pm | June 21, 2004
Those Juggernauts aren't really very high on my list of things to put in Halo 2. It would be a very short glimpse, then fiery death. then the last checkpoint. Over. And over. And over.
9/10
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romac1991
3:25 am | June 21, 2004
woops! Didnt mean to put sir there!
romac1991
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CoLd BlooDed
3:03 am | June 21, 2004
I read it, and I liked it.
The dialogue was realistic for both the Covenant and the humans, which is something that makes up a good story. The detail was decent, but in some spots I felt like there could've been more. I also don't think that the Elite would refer to Ronay as "Sir," that's what humans do to honor their superiors.
Anyways, let's put all what happened on SeverianofUrth's comments page behind us, and start over by me saying how I was impressed by this certain piece of work.
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Nick Kang
12:57 pm | June 20, 2004
Yeah, I'm still writing it, Opening, I'm just working on some other stories at the time, as well. I've already got the next few chapters of BTD, but it keep on updating before I submit it.
NK
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romac1991
10:35 am | June 20, 2004
The next chapter in this series will mostly be in space but dont worry it will be leading up to some bloody and gory ground action in the next next chapter.
romac1991
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OpeningAct
8:20 am | June 20, 2004
Nick, are you still writing Beckoning to Doom?
Cos I thought that was great...
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Nick Kang
9:25 pm | June 19, 2004
I'm writing a story where they find a new type of Covenant called 'Titans.'
NK
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Nick Kang
9:25 pm | June 19, 2004
I'm writing a story where they find a new type of Covenant called 'Titans.'
NK
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GangstaPimpDaddy(romac1991)
11:49 am | June 19, 2004
Sup homies! Im back yal gizzle frizzles! And guess whatizzle? Im not causingizzle troubleizzle fa shizzle dizzle!
romac1991
PS I was GangstaPimpDaddy!
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someone that you dont know
4:39 am | June 19, 2004
Sweetness. Every time you write you get better. The juggernaughts (spelled correctly?) are awesome. Flamethrower, love it. This was pretty good. 8/10 fo shizzle
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Solidus Snake
10:48 pm | June 18, 2004
Nice improvement, congrats. It was a little confusing though, but it was a good story. Keep up the good work. And keep writing, you'll become even more better at writing over time. Keep that in mind.
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b
9:54 pm | June 18, 2004
sorry i mispelled happens in my comment
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Black Titan
9:52 pm | June 18, 2004
That was awsome. I cant wait to read what happends. I dont know what those juggernauts are supposed to be, but they are awesome.
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romac1991
9:43 pm | June 18, 2004
keep in mind mainevent that you rarely see hunters in their 12 foot state and 11 feet is huge compared to a hunter in its combative state
romac1991
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INDUSTRIAL_aVATAR
5:56 pm | June 18, 2004
nice improvement, man. but somehow, these juggernauts seem suspiciously like brutes
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Mainevent
4:48 pm | June 18, 2004
A lot better. I really like the Juggernauts. They seem like some tough hombres. But 11 feet tall isn't huge for the Covenant, Hunters are 12. But it is still a good story. Keep this up.
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Jet
12:36 pm | June 18, 2004
This one´s a HUGE improvement from the first chapter. I really liked this story. Good job and keep it up.
9/10
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Nick Kang
12:03 pm | June 18, 2004
I got really confused around the point where they found the Juggernauts...
NK
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