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Comments for 'Project Egon - Chapter 1' |
Richard (Author)
11:40 am | April 24, 2004
Thanks for you comment Wiley. Please bare in mind that this is my first published story. It's also my first story which i havn't scrapped half way through.
The Next Chapter will be written totally in past tense and hopefully will be better quality than this first chapter.
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Wiley
9:27 am | April 22, 2004
not if you count wado, whos in hes 40's i think
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Nick Kang
12:45 am | April 22, 2004
Yeah, CoLd's right. I mean, here we are, the oldest of us is like what? Seventeen? Eighteen? And we're all writing stories. Now if that doesn't call out 'Wannabe English teacher!', then what does?
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CoLd BlooDed
12:12 am | April 22, 2004
Connie, here we're ALL wannabe English teachers.
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Mainevent
8:02 pm | April 21, 2004
It does take a good writer to stay in present tense consecutively.
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Wiley
7:10 pm | April 21, 2004
Jumping on me would be bad for your health.....
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Helljumper
4:46 pm | April 21, 2004
Don't jump on Wiley cause i feel the same. It really takes away from the story
ODST
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Wiley
11:38 am | April 21, 2004
Nice story, poor execution.
you switch tenses alot...too much. Pick a tense and stick with it, Ive found that past tense is better than present, as present can get tricky sometimes.
7/10
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Connie
10:35 am | April 21, 2004
What are you Wiley, an English teacher?
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