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Comments for 'PERSONAL DATA DIARY: UNKNOWN (full version!!!)'



Elfster
4:34 am | December 20, 2003
The writing skills of a five year old, but it was the first and the beginning wasn't so bad. The end was horribly rushed though.
Myth
1:14 am | December 11, 2003
Holy friggin crap...that's all i can say
CoLd BlooDed
6:02 am | December 7, 2003
Didn't he just stick all the paragraphs that he made before into one story. I still don't like it, but still, congrats on being first to post.

Personally I think the first story written on HBO should've set the bar but that didn't happen.
FOrunnER
5:17 pm | December 6, 2003
Dang, ummm, i thought you like vanished into the depths of reality lol.

I probably dont need to say this, but you are REALLY OLD.
Jink
1:36 am | December 6, 2003
I never thought I'd see the day when the very first writer at HBO returned.
Sorry to say most people found those Diaries to suck, no offense.
Silent Hunter
9:58 pm | December 5, 2003
Damn man...I thought you like...died...
hornet34
6:27 pm | December 5, 2003
Yeah, isn't this like the first series ever? You get points for being the pioneer here, and for the first fanfic ever its not really too bad when you consider that you had really no info or prior works to consult. Of course, by todays standards it is below par, but that's fine. Kudos to being the first.
Walker
12:58 pm | December 5, 2003
Wow... you are really, really old...


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