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Comments for 'Homeworlds IV'



Mainevent
11:36 am | September 6, 2003
Well, this is gonna be an important part of the story, so I hope you get to like it. Wait til the next installment, it should be there by tomorrow or sunday.

Includes indents. :)
Lord Revan
10:06 pm | September 5, 2003
I don't know... The others were excellent but this one, IMO, was kind of iffy... Maybe it was the inclusion of BG... I don't know... It was good, but it wasn't the same as your others.
Mainevent
8:00 pm | September 5, 2003
Alright guys.

My newest addition (which I just posted) does indeed include indentions. It should be up in a couple days, enjoy.
FOrunnER
2:40 pm | September 5, 2003
Great man. Your series is now one of my favorites. I like the way your using Blood Gluch in your series, I dont remember that ever being tried before. 10/10.
James Kinsella
2:04 am | September 5, 2003
I'm gonna go out on a limb and pull some ancient material up. [indent]! It's not a bug deal, just makes everything look more formal. Other thatn that it was pretty good. Interesting subject though. 9.2/10
Mainevent
7:12 pm | September 4, 2003
Anyone got any comments?


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