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Comments for 'The Entar Chronicles part 1' |
Demosthenes
10:33 pm | April 6, 2003
WOnderful. very good. I agree it had a very good beggining but the talking stuff, I got confused, I thought someone said something but he didn't and got very confused. No typos though. heh.
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Demosthenes
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Locke
7:10 pm | April 5, 2003
Part 2 will be here in the next fanfiction update! Hopefully that's tommorow! Also, i do mention the Forerunner a few times in this series, but for those of you who hate Forerunner stories, don't worry, they won't actually be in the series. I might have the Spartans find one frozen in stasis later, but that will be it.
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Demosthenes
8:38 pm | April 4, 2003
Sorry, as I've said on the part 3... I think it's part three... Well, the one with the title " 6 Way War ch. * bloodshed continues... that I've been on vacation for a while and also, I've had a lot of extra homework... Anyhow I'm printing this off and will post a comment later when I'm done reading it. Also, if what tank said is true, I'm going to be very annoyed, yet amazed. Funny... being mad and happy at the same time...
Well, I'll catch up to ya later...
by the way, there is an update to your latest comment on ch... the "bloodshed continues" one. It's nice...
cheers,
Demosthenes
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Locke
11:31 am | March 30, 2003
Thanks, I'll do that with Part 2.
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monitor101
1:57 am | March 30, 2003
Its been awhile Locke awasome job!
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Tank
7:57 pm | March 29, 2003
The start was so brilliant. The problem was when it got to the talking. You didn't start new lines for new speakers. What should have been some clever, well writen speech became a sort of vomit of text. Still it's brilliant. If you use the enter key more it will be amazing!!!
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Locke
5:59 pm | March 29, 2003
Ah, feels good to start a new series! Tell me how you liked it, thanks.
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