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Comments for 'Halo Battle Cry Chapter 1-4' |
Daniel Johnson
10:48 am | February 9, 2003
Hi, glad you liked it. Sorry about the gramatcal errors, my spell checker seems to have turned itself off! (Have no idea why)
I have read Fall of Reach, but i wanted to do my own version. Different view point i suppose.
I didn't want to spend hours writing a story so i had to take a few "leaps of faith" to get where i wanted. e.g. super soldiers.
Anyway, if you have any suggestions for a new story i'd be happy to right it.
Thanks reading and giving a honest opinion.
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Traumatised Marine
8:42 pm | February 5, 2003
Oh, and sorry to piss on your parade, but am I right in thinking that you haven't read the Fall of Reach???
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Traumatised Marine
8:33 pm | February 5, 2003
Great, loved it. However if you'll let me pick a few minor niggles, thinks like "he would of done it if he could" (I know that's not a quote but it's got the same mistake) it's not OF it's HAVE, this is the problem when people start pronouncing english a certain way and it causes them to write mistakes.
Cool, fresh perspective.
(But why would the government see creating supersoldiers as the next logical step after a 15ft alien spacecraft destroys a probe??????)
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Shadow Spartan
3:22 am | February 5, 2003
hey dude, this is really good...the beginning was kinda rushed, but i really liked...well done...
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