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Comments for 'Sep'Reo [The Reclamation] Chapter 2' |
JJiggssaw
11:11 am | March 29, 2004
Thanks a lot, CoLd. Your opinion means a lot to me.
Yes, being grounded is very thirteenish. I have never been grounded.
Ah, the carefree days of being eleven, may they never end...
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CoLd BlooDed
12:29 pm | March 27, 2004
Sorry, JJigg, after the long wait. (I was grounded. Pretty thirteenish, huh? :P)
But as for the story, I thought it was great, your description really gives it a sense of realism. I'll be waiting for the next chapter. Keep it up, JJigg!
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JJiggssaw
1:23 pm | March 25, 2004
Hitchy, eh? That's interesting...yeah maybe I rushed it...but it has longer descriptions and it has more action...I'lll remember that, thank you.
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IFlu
4:50 am | March 25, 2004
I tried to post on this story before the two week...er...intermission.
This one was nice, but I can tell you either rushed it a little more, or maybe you over edited. It doesn't have the same flow of your first chapter. The ideas are great, but the flow is a little...hitchy. Does that make sense? And it's not that nobody cares, its just that this is now a page back...and almost nobody goes this far back to read stories. Too bad Louis can't put up 4-5 per day instead of 21 at once.
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A.P.N JJiggssaw
11:53 am | March 23, 2004
nobody cares [sniff, wipe eye]. Maybe there will be more people in the summer...
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A.P.N JJiggssaw
1:59 am | March 23, 2004
Lets here some comments. Remember your promise, CoLd.
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A.P.N JJiggssaw
12:47 pm | March 22, 2004
Fan Fiction is up CELLL-A-BRATION times are on! Ahhhhhhhh yay.
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pooman
7:34 pm | March 21, 2004
good story 9.7/10
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A.P.N JJiggssaw
8:57 pm | March 11, 2004
Cummon people speak up
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JJiggssaw
12:45 pm | March 11, 2004
OK all you people-you're welcome to rub it in but I KNOW the formatting S-U-C-K-E-D. I wrote this on my strange word processor and not all the psuedocode seemed to get through so try to read it as best you can.
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CoLd BlooDed
5:01 am | March 11, 2004
Wow, that sucks that the Fan Fiction section was shut down, I don't have time to read this now, but I promise I will later. :)
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