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Comments for 'The Soldiers of Angelon: At Angelon They Wait' |
MC's Cousin
11:19 am | February 16, 2004
Yeah, I could see that. I'll give it a go, maybe it will work better than I would have let it. Hmm...
Signing Off
MCC
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Jink
7:34 pm | February 15, 2004
Holy crap, TM?! Is that really you?? Oh man, I haven't seen you since I was TheRedFaction...wow. Are you gonna start writing again?
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Traumatised Marine
6:33 pm | February 15, 2004
Whoa... that bit at the start was deep... too deep for me...
Amazing that an Xbox game could inspire this sort of writing.
You are Tres!
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Jink
5:28 pm | February 15, 2004
MCC: I understand what you mean. Halo may not seem like it combines well with this sort of story, but I feel a very strong connection between the two of them. Personally, combining fantasy worlds and ideas with futuristic war settings is an excellent mix to me. I can tell you that I'm not the only one who does this.
Spartan III: Thanks. The choppiness was present at times, but overall I felt that I was a good flow (don't get me wrong, I don't tend to settle for second best). I'm trying to get more serious about rewrite editing, just so those choppy parts in the story become as close as possible to non-existent.
Alpha Lance: Great to see you back. I was hoping to hear from you sometime soon. About the poetry feeling: Fantasy is really like an art, because it's all fiction-based and as we all know fiction is all imagination. I really enjoy writing like this, it makes my job much easier. I'm mostly imagination and not as much heavy on realistics. I can definitely put out a few more closer-related-to-Halo stories, but for now I'll keep up with my own pace.
Cheers, Jink.
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MC's Cousin
12:47 pm | February 15, 2004
Uh...Ah...Hmmmm. Well I'm not sure what to say about that one. Sounded...odd. Not that I don't like "odd". But that was just a little to odd. I like fantasy: Star Wars, LOTR. But combining Halo with that kind of thing doesn't really work to well. I will say I kinda like it. And the end started to sound a little more "likeable" so I'll read the next to see what kind of person you really are.
Signing Off
MCC
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Alpha Lance
7:52 am | February 15, 2004
CHEERS! I like this, it alomst seems poetry like to me.
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Spartan III
4:57 am | February 15, 2004
Wow, that was very good. Symbolic, great vocabulary, and very different than anything else. It was a little choppy at parts, but I guess the was nessecary to describe the different races.
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Jink
7:25 pm | February 14, 2004
I'm first today. This one started a while ago, I'd place most of the inspiration in Wado's stories, as well as many other 'relics' of the old fiction pages. This series will definitely keep going; TSOA Part 2 is already done and I'm working on TSOA Part 3. Cheers.
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