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Comments for 'Galaxy 07 - Part six - Discovery'



Hawk7886
2:48 pm | December 18, 2003
Ahh. The whole Cortana-restoration-means-destruction-of-the-host thing is quite a pickle. I can't wait to see how this ends up, although I can't agree with the MC tappin' Dax thing. It just seems so un-MC-like. I like how Cortana acts like a senior citizen, changes things alot.

10/10
witelancer
4:03 am | December 18, 2003
awesome. I read it on ff.net too, nice job.
-9/10
that guy over there who smiles just a bit too wide
10:30 pm | December 17, 2003
That was really cool. The only fault was what loked like an Elite saying "Covie". From what I have heard, the humans inhabiting HBO call the Covenant "Covies". The Covenant are deeply honour-bound so I think it would be disrespectful to say that. Just my thoughts, and no-one listens to my thoughts anyway....
SOS.Odin
10:00 pm | December 17, 2003
KILL THE MANATEES!!
been a while since ive seen jilly here
good job wit ur story pimp
err...can girls be pimps?
no matter
gj
Cyclone
8:33 pm | December 17, 2003
I find myself liking the allied Elites. Also, the whole twist with Cortana and the Chief is interesting. Keep it up, yo.
Jamirus99
8:10 pm | December 17, 2003
Damn....really good. Although I'm not liking that whole Cortana thing. But whatever- you lead, I follow.
Mainevent
5:30 pm | December 17, 2003
Sweet it was gurl. Hope them stupid Manatees get blowed up though. I got feelings about him.


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