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Comments for 'Band of Brothers' |
A Fan
4:35 am | June 26, 2004
CoLd BlooDed what is '' the code'' O.O?
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A Fan
4:21 am | June 26, 2004
well I like it ^___^ update soon *_____*
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'Nosolee
1:35 am | June 16, 2004
Man, many a FF have I seen, and all I can say is this is not the worst.
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Sean
6:57 pm | June 15, 2004
Yeah I guess your right.
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MC's Cousin
6:45 pm | June 15, 2004
You are entitled to your opinion, but in this case it is wrong. While from a certain standpoint, parts of this story were "good"; if you compare it to a really "good" story, which can be found here, you will see what is left to be desired. It just needs work, abeit a lot of work, to become better, and "good".
Signing Off
MCC
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Sean
6:43 pm | June 15, 2004
You guys are all one big jack-ass. I thought it was good.
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Gallagher
4:55 pm | June 15, 2004
dude. write more detail, not like "i went here in a week, he went there in 2." type writing. make it more detail and army facts, then u'll get it.
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Swordsman Elite
4:42 pm | June 15, 2004
boooo...That sucked man.
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Nick Kang
11:58 am | June 15, 2004
Man, this story was really boring. And I think 'Band of Brothers' is copyrighted, so you miht wanna change the title(not that you'd listen).
And Severian, Twinkie is a really annoying hacker that impersonates people. He spent the last batch of stories insulting, impersonating, and advertising for his non-halo-related story. And he signed it 'CEO of Bungie'? Apparently he hasn't seen the little message at the bottom of the screen that says
'We are NOT Bungie Studios!'
NK
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Helljumper
3:11 am | June 15, 2004
When will the newbies learn?
cosigning what MCC said
ODST
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Mainevent
1:08 am | June 15, 2004
Go to the last batch of fan fics, you'll see who Twinkie is really quick.
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SeverianofUrth
12:43 am | June 15, 2004
The Twinkie Guy? Who the hell is that? Mine said something about watching out for Blue Monkeys in the Fan Fic section... And the asshole signed it "CEO of Bungie".
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CoLd BlooDed
12:27 am | June 15, 2004
You, Jet, really don't know how to listen.
What did I say on your last two stories?
I'm also laughing over the title, Band of Brothers, really original.
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The NEW Zak
12:03 am | June 15, 2004
Oh.
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Mainevent
10:12 pm | June 14, 2004
I got an email from him. It was the twinkie guy.
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The NEW Zak
9:45 pm | June 14, 2004
hmmmmmmmm.........lharvest? What did it say?
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SeverianofUrth
7:05 pm | June 14, 2004
Has anyone else received a e-mail from someone called "lharvest"? I was wandering if they were true...
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MC's Cousin
3:32 pm | June 14, 2004
I think people are getting a little bit too giving here. Sure, I would encourage new people to write, but put your best effort into it. And if something if this is your best effort, you need to practice, keep working, and work harder. I'm not saying to stop writing, but not all people are ment to write. Do you see me writing? No, but I do know what I'm talking about. Most of the time.
All I'm saying, is that writing has become drugery. I am not trying to formally dis you, I'm just saying: It needs to be art, and it takes effort, a conserted and conscious effort, to make art.
Hell, I'm sounding preachy again...
Signing Off
MCC
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343winks
12:45 pm | June 14, 2004
ummmmmmmm, well. The story is interesting, but you are a little monotonous by not giving detail. One thing, everytime someone talks it is a new paragraph. It was a little hard to read since everything was just bunched together in 4 big paragraphs. I couldn't finish the story sice my eyes were bleeding from reading big paragraphs. You need to work on your grammer, format of your paragraph, and the story itself.
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crashedwarthog
6:23 am | June 14, 2004
i agree mainevent
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Akba
5:47 am | June 14, 2004
That was great. Holy crap man! Good work!
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Mainevent
9:54 pm | June 13, 2004
I wonder if Delvis, this mysterious person I've never seen on here before, could possibly be Jet...
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Delvis
9:52 pm | June 13, 2004
Nice one Jet. You're really pumping these fanfic's out! They all have great quality, and surely enough quantity! I hope to hear more of these from you soon.
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PaYnE
9:12 pm | June 13, 2004
S-U-C-K-E-D Spells Sucked!
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MC's Cousin
8:17 pm | June 13, 2004
Well, you need to USE THE CODE. This is about the htird story I have read whose author didn't think it important enough to read the instructions. Doing such things, is making a big mistake.
You need to use a lot more detail in there. Becaue of this lack of detail, you story went by far to fast. I couldn't get into at all. Work on that. There wasn't really a story that was interesting enough to make me want to finish the story.
Signing Off
MCC
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