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Comments for 'Halo: The MCconto Chronicles Part 3' |
Kaiavatar
3:23 pm | August 6, 2003
If you want to keep writing please pass english 9 as well as learn to use your spell checker
that was painful to try and read and i gave up after 6 paragraphs I am stupider for having seen this garbage
i am sure that you have a good idea just please learn how to write first
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JCDenton
12:34 pm | August 6, 2003
Part 4 is complete. I really hope i did it good. any grammar problems can be changed by me, this is a sort of Beta version of the complete one, that means that it still is in construction.
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JCDenton
12:34 pm | August 6, 2003
you saw that good. it took me a few days to create this. BTW part 4 of the series are now avtive. I dont know I post it before but still here it is. thanks for the comments again. any ideas and plot changes and other things are very pleasing for me. so if you like, you canbrainstorm with me.
JCDenton
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Jinkaiden-XI
10:15 pm | August 4, 2003
Very much improved. I am impressed with the changes and I can tell you've put great effort into this. I only saw a few spelling errors, very few puncuation and grammar, and only a small amount of sentences without capitilization.
Otherwise, great. 9.5/10
Jinkaiden-XI
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Covie Killer
6:03 pm | August 4, 2003
Numbers are better 9.9/10 thats a good score for you.
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Alpha Lance
5:31 pm | August 4, 2003
Yeah,well I'm using stars.Well sorry I guest I'll use numbers instead. 9.5/10
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scope
4:06 pm | August 4, 2003
9/10 Oh where using stars now?
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JCDenton
1:01 pm | August 4, 2003
thanks bro ;)
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Alpha Lance
4:46 am | August 4, 2003
That was good,I like it.Four 1/2 stars.
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