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Comments for 'Ishkabibbl's Story Part 4' |
sunscorpian
12:38 pm | March 29, 2003
good job with story ishka keep them com in ;)
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Ishkabibbl
4:41 am | March 29, 2003
Well for your first comment Red, I pre-wrote this story and now I need to go back to every part and check the dialouge to make sure its spased...guess i just missed over it.
Second part was in the first but i wrote about 19 pages of this story...dont' think i'll post it all.
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TheRedFaction
4:00 am | March 29, 2003
The only thing I have a problem with is how in the first paragraph, all the dialogue seems to be crammed together on a single line. I may be wrong, but that's what it looked like.
Otherwise, I thought it was pretty good (no offense, but it was better than first by far, even though most people think that first part in a series is the best one, like the story and plot dies away the longer it lasts).
How do you get these in so fast???
TheRedFaction
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Ishkabibbl
2:39 am | March 29, 2003
Didn't know people were liking them :-)
I'll post part five later on.
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Ishkabibbl
8:19 pm | March 28, 2003
Thanks!
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James Kinsella
3:24 pm | March 28, 2003
An Awesome story! I have looked forward to every on of your stories since the first one. Thanks for putting so much effort forward.
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James Kinsella
3:24 pm | March 28, 2003
An Awesome story! I have looked forward to every on of your stories since the first one. Thanks for putting so much effort forward.
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