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Comments for 'Chapter Three of Halo:Armageddon' |
CoLd BlooDed
6:20 pm | February 21, 2004
w00t! I'm on the list, what an honor lol!
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MC's Cousin
2:55 pm | February 21, 2004
The most I can think to suggest at the moment: your writing sound more like a drawn out descriptive. And you don't have a whole lot of material (like I said earlier). Read a post I put up in one of the above stories, says something about a bridge. One more thing. You need to make your writing flow. Read it to yourself before you post it, that's why it lets you preview your submission. If it doesn't flow than make the necessary corrections. I hope that will help.
Signing Off
MCC
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Chris Luchterhand
1:56 am | February 21, 2004
I need help writing, so, could one of you people who are actually kind enough to read this series give me some pointers?
CL
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Chris Luchterhand
1:56 am | February 21, 2004
I need some help writing my series. I'm afraid to write Chapter 4 now. So could one of you post some pointers? I thank you for reading my stuff.
I'm a newbie here. :D
CL
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SOS.Odin
11:51 pm | February 20, 2004
BAM!!
Cold and Helljumper are on!!!
and i feel no shame for adding my name :D
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Helljumper
5:51 am | February 20, 2004
SOS when do i get on that list of good writers
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CoLd BlooDed
4:25 am | February 20, 2004
Lmao, and I see you mentioned yourself... ;)
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CoLd BlooDed
11:59 pm | February 19, 2004
S-S-So nobody fell in love with...CoLd BlooDed? What a lost cause... :P
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SOS.Odin
10:00 pm | February 19, 2004
oh yeah
not bad, i got the MC in my story
its kinda hard to write with him
ya cant really develop him ur own way
but have meaning to ur stories
not just fiilling
keep it up
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SOS.Odin
9:58 pm | February 19, 2004
lotta noobs submitted stories this time
wheres Main, Walker, Alpha, H_K, Shade, Jilly, Odin, Dispraiser, wheres the writers we fell in love with :D
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MC's Cousin
3:27 pm | February 19, 2004
Interesting. But be wary when you put the MC int oyour story, not that it doesn't make a story: kick-ass. Otherwize, it was pretty good, if not short and lasking of any real material.
Signing Off
MCC
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