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Comments for 'Guardians of the Sanctum: (Part 02) -Alliance and Rebellion-' |
thedarkfire
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
I like how you portrayed the engineers with actual feelings, and I didn't find any grammar problems.
Good work
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Snowy Duck
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
great story
9/10, everything perfect, just a tad more description. as in why the hunters at the end did what they did.
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anonamous
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
haha. its very strange to see a grunt giving someone oreders. good job man.
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Nick Kang
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Exceptional!
You made it seem as if Engineers actually were living, breathing things, and that Grunts actually are cruel to lower beings.
NK
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GP-02
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
All i have to say is that this is just an AMAZING!!! story. Everything falls into place and it flows quite nicely. this is the first time i have read this story. so i read all three parts. Just Amazing. Im glad your gonna continue to write the rest of the series. Keep it up. And i liked the engineer part. Nothing wrong with it. LoL.
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BansheeBoy
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
The third part is under way but won't be ready for the next update. Plus, thanx for the comments
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Guardian
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Alright the engineer ownd! a well armed grunt...thats kick ass, nice story, easy to read, very well written and the story line is great
10/10
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Young Gunna
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Top Knotch story, it's good to see that there is still a good covenant story here. I enjoyed the last two when I read them and this one is no exception. 10/10 Great Story!
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Young Gunna
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Ahhh BTW, the engineer part was awesome, don't change your view of them.
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hunter_that_dances
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
i admire your optimism on the enigineers. very inspiring. keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Awacar
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Whoa! I like the last chapter, and this one was even better.
"Problem fixed" (excuse me if the qoute is wrong, I have a nagging feelling it is) was jst plain awesome!
More!
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Pho
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
cool. someone finally pit Hunter Vs. Brute. the description was great, but it would've been better if the fight was a little longer. the Hunter owned the Brute too easily. Hunter rule. heh.
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BansheeBoy
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
The beginning of part 03 has a huge battle between a pissed-off hunter and a brute. Who wins?
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Nick Kang
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
The Brute. In FS it says that a Brute can rip a Hunter apart with it's bare hands. And if the Brute has one of those big pointy sword-knives on it's gun, it will tear the Hunter apart.
NK
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BansheeBoy
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Whatever FS says, I'll always think of Hunters as top dog
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BansheeBoy
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Also, at the end of FS I remember the Chief and a Brute wrestling, and that Brute sure didn't tear MC apart. And MC can't tear a Hunter apart!
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