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Comments for 'The Grunt Revolt - Part I' |
HoZ
5:11 pm | July 14, 2004
Good story keep it up
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343 Salty Beans
4:53 pm | July 13, 2004
No offense Dave, but I think there are enough Grunt revolution series out there. Maybe you should do a backstory on Brute/Elite rivalry. You get good ideas for that sort of thing.
343SB
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Nick Kang
6:45 pm | July 12, 2004
What are you talking about Dave? The invasion of the Noob thing? Cause that's Severian's idea.
NK
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Dave Luck
5:58 pm | July 12, 2004
This is a great story.
If you discontinue this series, be prepared to get a nasty scar.
It's just that, like Nick says, they should talk a little more professionally.
Oh, and I was already making a Grunt Revolution story... They Ally with the UNSC, and pay the Covenant back.
Oh, and don't mind S.S. He's just out here to ruin things. Well, when payback day comes, we'll ruin him.
Please, Nick, just assign me a role I can perform well. I can't fight, but if you need someone interrogated by drugs or torture, if you need something blown up, set fire to, or a door welded shut or exploded, or someone lynched or executed (Please, you must bring them to me bound and sedated), I'll do it.
- Dave.
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GP-02
5:58 pm | July 12, 2004
Enough with the insults. Lets just get back to reading quality stories. Lets keep the love going. Once again, Good story Arithmomaniac. Keep it up
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Guardian
4:41 pm | July 12, 2004
well formatted, and well plotted too, but the only thing that kinda bored me was that you changed the wording Anti-Plasma cancelling Plasma, is Anti-matter cancelling matter. So, next time if you mention such a complex thing, don't change the wording its better that way.
9.8/10
keep that story coming i want to read more of it.
Spanish Spartan, I can write a better story than you can ever in your entire lifetime, and compared to 343 SB, Helljumper, NK, Wado what you will write will suck period.
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anon
12:59 pm | July 12, 2004
how did he make the thing on the plae
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Nick Kang
11:27 am | July 12, 2004
Or what was left of it BEFORE his stinking ass showed up.
NK
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keep it going
11:18 am | July 12, 2004
this is a cool story
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Anonymous
11:09 am | July 12, 2004
coolio!
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Jessica
8:13 am | July 12, 2004
spanish spartan, why don't you just shut the fuck up...You're disrupting HBO and it's peace...or what's left of it after you're stinking little ass showed up...
Jess -
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343 Salty Beans
2:45 am | July 12, 2004
*sigh* It seems like every time we get rid of one idiot, another one comes along to fill in the "dork" position at HBO. twinkie, Gangsta Pimp Daddy, and now...the beaner Spartan.
GET OFF THE SITE! JUST GO!
343SB
PS: Your insults lack everything that insults need. Sting, wit, correct spelling, a target that deserves it...
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Arithmomaniac
9:54 pm | July 11, 2004
Thanks, Nick Kang. I'll keep that in mind.
yeti - you are correct. Twice.
spanish spartan - people under 16 have something called SUMMER VACATION.
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white grunt
9:36 pm | July 11, 2004
great story hope u make more.
Grunts rock
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Nick Kang
6:47 pm | July 11, 2004
Hey spanish spartan, maybe you should GET a day job. Then you might be able to keep your trailer.
NK
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D Piddy
6:43 pm | July 11, 2004
D Piddy will kill ss!
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spanish spartan
5:04 pm | July 11, 2004
no motherfucking bitch. keep your day job
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Darksniper1
2:45 pm | July 11, 2004
Hey man good story i have finished the other stories i was followin and this seems to be another one i will look forward to when they post new fan fics
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Anonymous
2:36 pm | July 11, 2004
great story keep up the good work
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ThatOneGuy
11:09 am | July 11, 2004
One of the best starting stories I have seen. Lets keep it going, I can't wait to see whats next!
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Pho
3:57 am | July 11, 2004
pretty good. want to see where this is going. since it's "The Grunt Revolt" i hope it's up to par with "The Charge of the Grunt Brigade." - my favorite rebellion type series so far. iono, maybe i'm just babbling.
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grunteater
2:40 am | July 11, 2004
sounds exciting
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GP-02
2:31 am | July 11, 2004
As said before, i need to know where this story is going. Great start though. keep it up. Can't wait to see how the grunts will revolt.
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Mastergrunt
1:42 am | July 11, 2004
One question, where are the grunts?
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LostRock
1:19 am | July 11, 2004
I tried to fiddle with a Grunt revolt back in my first series...too bad I never finished it. Please keep this going.
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yeti
10:15 pm | July 10, 2004
wow, finally.
Someone has made a Grunt Revolt story! yay!!!! Those Grunts are so darn cute.
just a coupple of mnor problems.
1. the SKYSCRAPER is 50 feet high. thats only about 6 storeys high. of course, im going to assume you meant 50 storeys high, so ok.
2.the rifle shot a BLACK RAY OF LIGHT. Black is the absence of light. light is not black. light is brighter than black.
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hunter_that_dances
8:33 pm | July 10, 2004
continue this series....or else.....
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Santo 501
6:57 pm | July 10, 2004
The story is great and i can't wait to see what happens.
Please continue your story.
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Grunteater
6:39 pm | July 10, 2004
Brilliant story, please continue with it.
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Timberwolf
3:27 pm | July 10, 2004
I WANT to see where this goes.
That is all i have to say.
If you don't finish this, it is a crime against humanity
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Nick Kang
2:15 pm | July 10, 2004
That was pretty cool. When Khalen was testing ot the anti-plasma rifle, they talked a bit...unproffesionally, and the appointment was much too short. Other than that, I am interested to see where this goes...
NK
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