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Comments for 'Aftermath Part 5' |
GarlicJr11
11:27 am | April 30, 2002
I like the way you made it so that the bad guy wasn't someone foolish like I have seen in so many other stories. One little touch up, however, it is best if you typed out the numbers if they are less than one hundred and put them in italics.
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Ice
7:24 pm | April 25, 2002
=)
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Alex Cross
11:51 am | April 17, 2002
Thanks for your comments Jaywhit. Anybody else want to comment on my story or make any suggestions? I'm open to constructive criticism.
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Jaywhit10
10:55 pm | April 16, 2002
Haha that was smart. I can't wait till the next one. (<_>)('_')
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