halo.bungie.org

They're Random, Baby!

Fan Fiction


Comments for 'Halo 2: The Covenant Wars [Chapter 1]'



JJiggssaw
11:12 pm | March 7, 2004
Hey Thomas-
Not bad. Make sure you run it through spellcheck and don't always 'ignore rule' with the grammar. Pretty good.
The Author [Thomas Harper]
3:00 pm | December 19, 2003
yes i have read The Flood and the other halo book too. its called The Fall of Reach. Its another jenkins.
HaloFREAK
3:07 am | May 26, 2003
oops i double posted again. my bad
HaloFREAK
3:03 am | May 26, 2003
Jenkins wasnt killed in 343 he was imprisoned in his own body, havent you read the book?Anyway died a day later after 343 when the ring went BOOM!
HaloFREAK
3:03 am | May 26, 2003
Jenkins wasnt killed in 343 he was imprisoned in his own body, havent you read the book?Anyway died a day later after 343 when the ring went BOOM! Read it [The Flood] it kicks @$$.

oh and if anybody here is wondering about the delays in my story i cant get it posted cuz my internet is kinda screwy right now.
Covenential Puppet
4:10 pm | May 19, 2003
Not too shabby, but not too excellent either.
I think the name weren;t all that too creative and the battle scenes could have been described better. I give it *** (Three Stars)
Steele
12:18 am | May 19, 2003
Not too original, but originality is hard nowadays, isn't it?

7.5/10. Work on the grammar.
Ishkabibbl
10:48 pm | May 18, 2003
It could always be someone else with the neame Jenkins, we don't know the 'popular' names of the halo era are lol.
scope
8:26 pm | May 18, 2003
8/10 How can jenkins be in HALO 2 when he was KIA in the 343 GS level?
Wiley Kimball
4:59 pm | May 18, 2003
Not too bad. [indent], and a new paragraph everytime someone new speaks. 8/10


bungie.org