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someone that you dont know
11:44 pm | March 26, 2004
thanks everyone ya ill try to learn this meter stuff. You'll be seeing more from me soon
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Thomas Harper
11:06 pm | March 25, 2004
u should be proud of urself with this one
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Jetboogieman
7:03 pm | March 24, 2004
Not bad
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Flu
6:29 pm | March 24, 2004
Short. I like the voice. It has a consistent rythm (pairing of syllables and lines) except for a few places. Meter (number of syllables per line) is off in a few places. Not bad. You almost could have made this into two haiku's.
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The Collector
12:18 pm | March 24, 2004
Hmm Not bad at all
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D
8:35 pm | March 23, 2004
That wasn't bad i liked it. Im a new poem wrighter 2.
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D
8:35 pm | March 23, 2004
That wasn't bad i liked it. Im a new poem wrighter 2.
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