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Comments for 'All Roads Lead To Sol...But Unfortunately Not Away: Chapter 24' |
Agent Shade
3:14 pm | July 19, 2004
yes, still impressive. great piece of writing, please continue
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dave
10:53 pm | July 17, 2004
that was awsome. as the others pointed out, you do a good job trying to strive for meaning and the quality of your work. i also like how you make the characters "seem" real. good job.
-the other dave
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Slit Throat
3:23 pm | July 17, 2004
I meant the general idea.
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Berconius
1:08 am | July 17, 2004
Yeah, I was going to point out the Ode the Mazar Rackman, too.
Great writing, great last line. Definitely a fine piece of writing in the sense of meaning vs. violence.
I'd sure like to see where this ends up. You've also done one particular thing that few other series on this site ever has. Your character development actually creates people we can feel for and care about. And now that the crowd is thinning, that's definitely the case.
Slainte, *tips imaginary hat*
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Dave Luck
12:32 am | July 17, 2004
Awesome, awesome, awesome.
I like how you'd rather go for meaing and quality, rather than blood and gore. I don't like excessive action. It's too easy to write, and most n00bs use it to cover up their pathetic failiures. You're doing good, though.
Excellent.
- Dave.
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S7N
10:30 pm | July 16, 2004
Slit Throat: one sentence was taken from Ender's Game, the rest was all me, despite the obvious parrallels ;)
i've formatted it this time so hopefully its better
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Slit Throat
1:46 pm | July 16, 2004
Man that was nice, even if most of it was taken from Ender's Game…
10/10
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Jessica
12:43 pm | July 16, 2004
Oooooh! Good Story!@! ^.^ ^.^
Jess
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