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Comments for 'A Sight for Sore Eyes' |
Nick Kang
8:54 pm | June 10, 2004
It was okay. First of all, 'ringed' is not a word. That would be 'rang.' Second of all, the detail and descriptions could use a little polishing. You should also use the code, or else the others will BLAM you for it. You don't need to put swear words with stars, as you are alowd to swear in your stories.
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Pyramid-Head
5:56 pm | June 10, 2004
Very good story. Nice action sections, one of the best I've read here.
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dude
9:25 am | June 10, 2004
nice post man awesome story
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