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Comments for 'The Fall of Fate: Special Edition (Parts 7-8)'



CoLd BlooDed
6:38 am | December 27, 2003
Good, very good. 10/10

Oh ya, I stuck to Mainevents suggestion on a sequel to the Fight for New Tatley series, its called "Forced Betrayal".

Its posted, you should check it out after its on HBO, its from an Elites point of view. Thanks!
Mainevent
1:36 am | December 27, 2003
Nevermind.

The wooden door was to the building, not the cell.
'Nosolee
9:36 pm | December 26, 2003
Relax, Main, it all comes into play later.

If you want to read the origional, search for 'The Fall of Fate', and you will get thirteen installments in this series...but if you are patient, you'll get the next special edition collaboration piece.
'Nosolee
8:10 pm | December 26, 2003
What! Wooden Door! What are you talking about?
Mainevent
7:03 pm | December 26, 2003
And wait just a damn second?

A wooden door? An elite as strong as the MC? not makin sense har...
Mainevent
6:56 pm | December 26, 2003
It was coo.

But they won't escape. Not if my little friend can help it...
'Nosolee
6:22 pm | December 26, 2003
Ohh, fuk me...lol, j/k.
Thanks
Hawk7886
5:51 am | December 26, 2003
You misspelt "'Nosolee"

Bwahahaha, your proofreading skills are no match for mine!!!11!!11!11!1!!one!1

"When I was asked for a name, me and my brethren had none, so the *elites* just called us Grunts."

:P

10/10
scope
5:05 am | December 26, 2003
10/10 ITS ABOUT FUCKIN TIME NOSOLE


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