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Comments for 'Halo: Captain Keyes Story Part 4' |
BIG J
12:09 am | April 14, 2004
Gold elites are called commander elites duh! but very good
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ROBERT
6:02 am | February 25, 2004
ELITES SPEAK ENGLISH WITH A TRANSLATOR
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monitor101
5:20 am | April 14, 2003
No harm done Kinsella. Thancks TM!
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monitor101
5:18 am | April 14, 2003
TM you on?
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James Kinsella
4:12 am | April 14, 2003
To all in this comments section.
I've just got home at 1230am april 14th and I immediatly went to look at HBO fanfic. I was on the way to atlanta from 4:00 on april 11th on so there is no way I could have said anything from that point on. I'm sorry that you were offended by my impersonator.
James
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Shadow Spartan
2:22 pm | April 13, 2003
nice job Traumatised marine, i agree with what you say.
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Traumatised Marine
1:30 pm | April 13, 2003
J Kinsella: A hint; don't comment on spam comments, it's what they want- to read people's reactions.
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Traumatised Marine
1:19 pm | April 13, 2003
It's just people trying to demonise someone.
The dick whose impersonating people is probably a utter newbie to this site, and is trying to establish himself by throwing abuse at people because he thinks it will get him some sort of support.
Heh, guess that blew up in his face!
And if we can PLEASE redirect the comments back onto monitor101's story, he writes it, you should read it!
monitor101; Your fic was sort of like easy-listening music, you know what's happening so you don't have to think to much too visualise things.
It's a good thing, I find it helps me appreciate and enjoy your story far better.
I hope this isn't the last RELEVENT comment you recieve, you deserve the kudos.
Good stuff.
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monitor101
5:04 am | April 13, 2003
ENOUGH! Dispraieser means no harm.
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Dispraiser
1:01 am | April 13, 2003
Heh, around christmas time. I have no idea why I have been figureheaded for this indent thing, but really, I am not the only one doing it, and for the love of god, I even offered to do it for you! This is what I get for trying to help...
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el_halo_diablo
8:33 pm | April 12, 2003
LMAO nice find Dispraiser, but how far back did you have to look for that? "Mis-Adventures of Master Chief"?
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monitor101
4:44 am | April 12, 2003
alright people lets drop the dising on Dispraiser. About the language the Elite was using a translator as for the Grunts well I have no idea.
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Dispraiser
3:29 am | April 12, 2003
A quote from Diablo here on one of my earlier fanfics...
Thanks for your comment about my fan fic Dispraiser, I hope you stay on HBO
ALways hated me? Sure...
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Sarge
3:18 am | April 12, 2003
As I said I was clarifing for the author grunts don't speak English.
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Knightmare(MM
2:27 am | April 12, 2003
Alright, back off. Leave the D-man be. In answer to the thing about the language thing, grunts speak their own tongue. Its the translation software that allows them to be heard, yes.
It is the ELITE RACE that can either speak in their own tongue, or the tongue of the human race.
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el_halo_diablo
10:28 pm | April 11, 2003
I never liked that ass dispraiser lol. I hope him and his crappy-ass site can stay away from here. He always acted superior to everyone else, what the fuck was HE thinking.
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Sarge
10:08 pm | April 11, 2003
No it's me... I've been posting quite a few comments lately...
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Dirty Commie
10:01 pm | April 11, 2003
wow, im sure that was kinsella, brilliant ruse.
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Sarge
9:52 pm | April 11, 2003
One small thing I have a question for you do you think the grunts are speaking English? That's the impression I got... It's really that the MC has a language thing so he can understand grunts... they aren't really speaking English you know that right? I was just assuming since you said, they spoke their own language and acted as though the marine could understand.
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monitor101
8:31 pm | April 11, 2003
Dispraiser so long buddy and you call me a moron is that all you can come up with? Sad! Well someone needs anger managment. Kinsella not tot harsh and you want to battle it out then say the hell away from my comment section.
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James Kinsella
7:53 pm | April 11, 2003
it was me asshole, i said you were an asshole and frankly, im glad you are leaving...stupid fucker
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Arthur Wellesly
7:30 pm | April 11, 2003
Uh, we'll miss you.
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Dispraiser
7:12 pm | April 11, 2003
I have jsut sdecided to stop giving comments to these fanfic because clearly most of the people here are morons. I offer to help you by indenting your fanfic and you insult me, then some moron who is too much of a coward to show their real face takes my name and attempts to humiliate it. Well, sorry if I have annoyed you by pointing out a problem and offering a solution to it...
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Dispraiser
7:10 pm | April 11, 2003
Look, a moron!
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Dispraiser (lol)
5:51 pm | April 11, 2003
im an idiot, im gay, im stupid, yadda yadda yadda...just so you all know this aint dispraiser, but someone who is pissed at him and other people who critisize people for indent mistakes....it's just a small grammar error you assholes, im sure they will fix it....you should stop worrying about other people's problems and worry about your own shit stories...they suck...
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monitor101
4:42 pm | April 11, 2003
I'm not over reacting Knightmare. Kinsella that was hella funny! Kineslla more professional huh whatever.
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James Kinsella
3:43 pm | April 11, 2003
I have read your story and no I was not copying Dispraiser. I hadn't refreshed the page so i didn't even know that he had said anything. I don't really care it just makes it so much more professional.
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Steele
2:47 pm | April 11, 2003
8/10. I haven't got the time to waste commenting on things that don't matter.
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Knightmare(MM
1:55 pm | April 11, 2003
Alright guy, calm down. Just relax. You know what to do in your next installment. Its either that, or they haven't read the piece, in which case that's THEIR problem, not yours.
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monitor101
1:17 pm | April 11, 2003
Weevil and proto boy you two better get hell away from my comments.
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monitor101
1:08 pm | April 11, 2003
Ok now I'm pissed off dispraiser I did indent damn it and Kinsella it sounds like you are copying disprasier, your first said only punctustion but in your next comment about an hour later you said to indent and I didn't copy the damn script. Thank you diablo. And disprasier I'll mail you a story of you can kiss my ass!
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James Kinsella
12:47 pm | April 11, 2003
I just wasted a minute of my life reading those stupid posts. What the Fuck? Are you on any illegal substances? Have you possibly imbibed to much alcohol? Did you possibly eat an entire bag of shrooms? I'm not sure but whatever your problem is don't drive anywhere; accidents happen to much. Also, keep in mind that you can't fly, no matter what the squid standing next to you says.
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Lord Proto Betty of the WEST
10:57 am | April 11, 2003
lets go lets go lets go ,, i need to get some sunlight i lieds
(i'm a sunflower in an ornatly decorated teracotta pot)
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Lord Proto Betty of the WEST
10:57 am | April 11, 2003
this is last one
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weevil of the warp ::74:: six flags
10:55 am | April 11, 2003
lots and lots and lots and lots and lots and lots and lots and lots and lots and lots and lots and lots and lots and lots and lots and lots and lots and lots and lots and lots and lots and lots of love to all u sunlight deprivd nerd who should stop plotting to kill bushbaby and think like real anchovies
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weevil of the warp ::74:: six flags
10:53 am | April 11, 2003
dispraiser, u should be ashaimed of urslef u geek, latin americans have as much rite to sneeze as u do!
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weevil of the warp ::74:: six flags
10:53 am | April 11, 2003
INDENT but it is only sniff-your-hair-while-you-sleep-and-then-you-wake-up-with-clumps-missing love
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weevil of the warp ::74:: six flags
10:51 am | April 11, 2003
I LOVE U REALLY WITH HOT CHOCOLATE BUNS WITH CHERIES AND PEPPERONI AND SMALL INNOCENT FARM WORKERS
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weevil of the warp ::74:: six flags
10:51 am | April 11, 2003
YES I DOOOOOOOOOOOOOO22YE3794533&&&&
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weevil of the warp ::74:: six flags
10:51 am | April 11, 2003
NO I DONT??
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weevil of the warp ::74:: six flags
10:51 am | April 11, 2003
I HATE U ALL
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Lord Proto Betty of the WEST
10:42 am | April 11, 2003
,,indent,, !! dispraiser 3$%$(72
{WARNGING spellchecker did not find that one: This must be read in a mock viking voice}
dispraiser: wat is ur problem??
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Arinoth Koby
3:07 am | April 11, 2003
It's really not that hard to indent, nice story though.
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James Kinsella
2:22 am | April 11, 2003
INDENT!INDENT!INDENT!INDENT!INDENT!INDENT!INDENT!INDENT!INDENT!INDENT!INDENT!INDENT!INDENT!INDENT!
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lol
2:08 am | April 11, 2003
amen el_halo_diablo, amen
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el_halo_diablo
1:57 am | April 11, 2003
Dispraiser....shut the fuck up with the damn indent shit...
About the story, i liked it even though i knew exactly what was going to happen, and i can definatly see where this is going next (mabye a little keyes/flood action goin on later? Anyway, proceed witht he next part as you please.
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Dispraiser
1:51 am | April 11, 2003
indent. Mail it to me and I'll do it for you, just make sure it gets done...
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James Kinsella
1:08 am | April 11, 2003
Punctuation. Other than that it was good. Kind of taken from the book and Halo. It almost seemed like you copied down the script. I could be wrong, but that's what it sounded like to me.
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Shadow Spartan
12:59 am | April 11, 2003
hey...i noticed some quotes there from the new Halo book, well done....not bad, keep it coming
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