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Comments for 'Devestation- Chapter One- The Raiding Party' |
monitor101
8:44 pm | September 27, 2003
that was weird some spelling errors but I'm guessing the errors in the dialogue are just slang which I can relate to in my storys. Pretty good. 8/10
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that guy over there who smiles just a bit too wide
2:40 am | September 27, 2003
nice story, very impressed, just remember to spellcheck. can you give me a heads up when the next one comes down? looking forward to it. my email is spyroguy@hotmail.com and can people please not add me to their msn just because they know my addy? i'm just not gonna add you in the first place if you do.
that guy over there who smiles just a bit too wide
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Sim McGaulkin
1:19 am | September 27, 2003
it's supposed to be spelled
"DevAstation." an A, not a E.
Oh well, too late.
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Ishkabibbl
12:21 am | September 27, 2003
I'm not sure, but devestation just doesn't look right to me.
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