Comments for 'Desecrating Providence (Prologue Part 1)'
Joe
4:09 am | January 30, 2004
good stuff
Alpha Lance
12:20 pm | January 15, 2004
Nothing to complain about here.
'Putamee
3:26 pm | January 14, 2004
Very cool... Tank battle was awesome. You forgot to italic the ship name a buncha times and you said the colonel was a field commander, but then the next paragraph that he's an assistant field commander.
