Comments for 'The First Step Into A Long Fall Part 2'
Robo42786
7:21 pm | May 2, 2002
might want to proof read and use spelling and grammer check, otherwise its great
me
11:58 am | May 2, 2002
hey i think i might have messed up on this one but the others will be better ,.. and if you guys dont like this series jus lemme know i'll go back to the ole drawing board