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Comments for 'A New Breed Part 1: All Hell Chapters 1 and 2' |
Nike
12:09 am | April 15, 2003
*Grand Theft Auto
*Part 5 of Earth: A Halo Tale
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Nike
12:02 am | April 15, 2003
[i]James Kinsella
2:35 AM | April 6, 2003
Once again, the spelling sucks. I hope next time spellcheck is a part of your plans, as well as a friend reading them and telling you how stupid it is BEFORE you submit them.[/i]
I did NOT say that this sucked. With Zach being my friend, I didn't want to tell him openly that it sucked. That's just not what I do.
I gave him tips. I agreed with him to edit the story. But due to a GRnd Theft Auto story I'm about to write, a sequel to TImesplitters 2 to write, and not to mention finding time to start Part 5, I've been very busy.
School, reports, and some nice dreams of girls that I like have been distracting me...the latter being very pleasant and soothing, :D.
Just try harder, Zach, take your time, and maybe you'll do good. (And maybe I'll get off my ass and submit the edited version of this story, lol).
AIM me to ask me questions of my new stories I'm writing. AIM name is Jimmy Needles09.
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Ishkabibbl
8:04 pm | April 7, 2003
I don't think my starting fan fic was this bad...not good...but not like this.
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Dispraiser
1:37 am | April 7, 2003
"it's my first time"
Excuses... I have noticed that since I have started all my mean comments all of the coments have been getting a little more mean... No more, "Nice fanfics ;)"s or "Plan to see the next"s. Looks like people are finally coming out of their shells... Thank god...
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apologizes
8:51 pm | April 6, 2003
ok, i was a little harsh, sorry dude, good luck on your next one
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GhostmouthZach
7:44 pm | April 6, 2003
Well Ill try to do better in the future. Im letting Nike review my next story. thanks for the
tips James Kinsella.
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James Kinsella
5:02 pm | April 6, 2003
My first time went okay, so thats kinda a stupid excuse. Read it, it's called Just Getting Started: Chapter One.
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GhostmouthZach
4:55 pm | April 6, 2003
Hey its my first time
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This story sucks my balls
2:33 am | April 6, 2003
i think that is self-explanatory
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This story sucks my balls
2:33 am | April 6, 2003
need i go on?
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James Kinsella
1:35 am | April 6, 2003
Once again, the spelling sucks. I hope next time spellcheck is a part of your plans, as well as a friend reading them and telling you how stupid it is BEFORE you submit them.
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