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Comments for 'The Plot Thickens...' |
Jamirus99
12:27 pm | December 1, 2003
That changes the whole thing...why the hell didn't you make it into a series? You're now losing major points on presentation in my book.
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D
7:00 am | December 1, 2003
Oh, I'm sorry. Note the sarcasm.
Anyway, I tried. But the fanfiction submission form wouldn't let me. So sue me.
I'm thinking of posting the next update somewhere else.
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D
6:17 pm | November 30, 2003
I forgot to mention one thing: For further clarification on what exactly I am referring to, read my first story.
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Hawk7886
8:28 am | November 30, 2003
It seems like this is part 3 of a series. . .
It doesn't really have an introduction section, it just LEAPS into the story.
Oh well, it was still ok . . .
7/10
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Dispraiser
6:18 am | November 30, 2003
This one has a lot that most others dont. Before I start to read a fanfic it's almost like the matrix loading zone, just a big white area, except black. Normally, it is feilled with pictures of the location, however, with yours it starts with words. Use that style when you need someone to pay attention. Not to who is saying the words, why, when, how, anything, just what they are saying. Great if you knew what you were doing, okay if you didn't. These words are alone, just a sentance "Class 2, was it?". I mean, just right out there, BAM. Hard to say at 1:20 AM. Just know that in this sea of unbathed fanfics, yours stands above saying that at least it has some idea what it's doing. This one probably woudl have gotten a flackfic of one.
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Sentinel
8:39 pm | November 29, 2003
What the hell are you talking about?
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Jamirus99
8:24 pm | November 29, 2003
Very interesting, nicely done
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