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Comments for 'A Hard Landing' |
CoLd BlooDed
5:21 am | March 1, 2004
Well, thanks for reading my stuff. :D
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CoLd BlooDed
12:00 pm | February 27, 2004
Your name is James? Or Sergeant Peppers? ;)
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MadJackal
4:52 am | February 27, 2004
You guessed it. Your main character and I share the same name. I'll say it again: Your writing has greatly improved. I really enjoyed reading this one.
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MadJackal
4:52 am | February 27, 2004
You guessed it. Your main character and I share the same name. I'll say it again: Your writing has greatly improved. I really enjoyed reading this one.
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MadJackal
10:16 pm | February 26, 2004
Especially when the guy with my name died *sniff* :)
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MadJackal
5:39 am | February 26, 2004
Wierd, I read this story and saw my name repeated several times, and it disturbed me.:)Anyway, good job, I liked the way it ended.
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Nick Kang
2:37 am | February 25, 2004
I think the easier way to fight the Flood is with the good ol' shotgun. But anyway good job, keep it up.
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Hawk7886
8:46 pm | February 24, 2004
A little inconsistency between the faceless Pilot of the Pelican wreck and James, it could've been revised better ;)
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Mind_Affecting_Parasite
2:42 pm | February 24, 2004
That was good I think. And I like you inclusion of the Flood, ahhhhhhhhh. Although they seemed like they were on "Easy" to me. Still, it was good work.
-MAP
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SOS.Odin
3:15 am | February 24, 2004
I LOVE BRUTES!!!!
THEY SHOULD HAVE KILLED EVERYONE!!!!
AHAHAHHAAHA!!!!!
good job man
..and thx for the promotion :D
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CoLd BlooDed
11:44 pm | February 23, 2004
You didn't like the pilot? :O
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MC's Cousin
10:50 pm | February 23, 2004
Nice and Nice. You dropped a well built bridge for us. Although it took a while for that dang pilot to die. I would suggest that you only work on one story thing at a time, but whatever tickles you fancy.
Signing Off
MCC
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CoLd BlooDed
3:42 pm | February 23, 2004
Wow, thanks Delta and Helljumper. :D
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Helljumper
7:36 am | February 23, 2004
Wow, CoLd you are the man
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IAmDelta
5:30 am | February 23, 2004
Beautiful. I haven't the heart to make petty critiques on this. I think you've made my night. Keep it up.
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FOrunnER
2:44 am | February 23, 2004
Very good, nice action. My only complaint is you made the Brutes seem a little weak. In Halo: First Strike, MC had shoot, wrestle, then finally stick a grenade to, a single Brute to kill it and almost got himself killed in the process. Nice story nonetheless.
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CoLd BlooDed
11:26 pm | February 22, 2004
So it was good? Lmao. ;P
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blind_snowman
11:19 pm | February 22, 2004
Action packed, appropriate use of the word 'fuck'.
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