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Comments for 'Ascendant Part IX: The End of the Beginning' |
Asimo
11:58 am | September 4, 2003
Hey your series was really suspensful and well-written. And people make too big a deal about grammar errors; there were no blaring ones in your story. Anyway I really liked the story, it was a good length, but I can totally see you writing a big long saga that takes like a year to finish and everyone is dying to know what the ending will be--you've got a lot of creativity and dramatic writing skills and you're really knowledgable about all this battle terminology. Oh yeah and just a dumb comment from a girl's point of view, I liked how you put a girl in your story kicking some ass. Great work Arch!
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spartan415
1:28 am | September 2, 2002
Oh yeah and by the way arch. remember that we're gonna do the group story after we've each finished ours.
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spartan415
1:26 am | September 2, 2002
This story that knightmare, arch, and I are doing is gonna be awesome. Its already awesome anyways. And its true that if you fall behind theres gonna be a difficulty in explanations. We took someone in though recently. I'll let you know who later.
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goodybox(brigad of marines)
9:39 pm | September 1, 2002
no don't end it. but thats your choice i liked it very much
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Arch
2:13 pm | August 30, 2002
most likely, cuz my partners don't really want anyone else joining, cuz it's too hard to explain everything that's going on now, we've got a pretty intense and deep storyline so far, so it's hard to help anyone who falls behind. sorry man!
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Arch
11:49 am | August 29, 2002
lol thanks, i'll do just that, Knightmare. and yes, i actually am starting a new series on my own. i can't talk too much about it, but i think you might like it.
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Knightmare
11:24 am | August 29, 2002
since i got a nice early 'peek' i'll just say this. Next time we use the forerunner it ain't gonna be so... friendly. Oh and msn me i have yet ANOTHER interesting twist to tell you. Remember the hooded guy?
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Wado
11:02 am | August 29, 2002
I enjoyed this very much. Good job.
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el_halo_diablo
3:05 am | August 29, 2002
oh oops, I didnt know you guys were actually working together until I read you fan fic Arch, well that changes all of what I said...Or does it?
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el_halo_diablo
2:24 am | August 29, 2002
fell free to email me, if you want any opinions on any new or continuing stories, and I will be sure to respond.
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Knightmare
12:34 am | August 29, 2002
we will,
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Sarge
10:10 pm | August 28, 2002
So it's ending huh. Hmm this was a good serious that has definnately matured since the beginning.
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