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Comments for 'Halo: The Covenant Frontier' |
Vero
1:09 am | November 23, 2002
DAMN!!!!!THAT STORY WAS HELLA TIGHT!!!!?!?!?!?!? Nice perspective form the elites point of view. You should write more from the covenant side of the war. Good understanding of them. I also liked the way you made up the parts of how the "Cyborg" kept escaping as shown in the cinematics. Very awesome with that. Keep up the good work.
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WargodX2399
3:51 pm | November 21, 2002
Anyways back to the subject. I think that you had a very good story. You had really good expressions, too. Lol shorten it up though.
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Bruce
3:45 pm | November 21, 2002
Wow. This story is good. Hey, from now on I'll be going as WargodX2399.
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Brigad of Marines
12:15 pm | November 21, 2002
They said they were going to TRY but the peice of halo crashed into them. You can catapult a banshee using a plant. It's just like a sattilite when they catupult using a plant. they wouldn't have enough supplies, that you are right in. Are you going to make a continuing story. make it a little shorter.
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Longsword Ace
1:25 am | November 20, 2002
This is the best fan fiction i've read since the Renegade Marines series. I love the longer stories as they have more time to form connections to characters and to form the setting in your imagination. Overall it had a believable spacing because it followed the missions and ranking in the Elite species. The only thing i found hard to swallow was using the planets gravity to catapault them toward a colony. Given the size of the Banshees i doubt they carry enough provisions for that amount of time. I hope you create another piece of fan fic soon!
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el_halo_diablo
11:48 pm | November 19, 2002
indeed it was
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Xzilen
8:14 pm | November 18, 2002
Well I'm selfish :)I want longer stories :-pOr maybe it could have been broken up into different submissions, but whatever, I liked it!
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el_halo_diablo
1:20 am | November 18, 2002
ah yes, but don't many more people read the smaller stories?
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Xzilen
5:59 pm | November 17, 2002
I just had to post again when reading the other comments.Do not, under ANY circumstances lower how much you write. Too many stories are too short!
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el_halo_diablo
4:59 am | November 17, 2002
this is what happens when you make large stories...not many people read them, im sorry. hope to see more from you (just mabye a little less writing ;) )
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cool silverthorn
10:36 pm | November 16, 2002
Man that was LOOOONG!! Realy good but still long, you could have done ten stories with that! Don't get me wrong it was amazingly good and I would like more people to make theirs longer, can't wait for Earth to be attacked!
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Xzilen
6:18 pm | November 16, 2002
Holy crap... This was GOODI liked the whole Elite prespictive. I would have liked to see the Elite finding out how Keyes got aboard the ship and blobbed up, but non the less amazing.One of the few things I didn't like was the idea that they actually believed that Threshold's gravity would have catupulted them far enough to reach a colony... Space is just too big for that.Near the end I was figuring he would be the Elite fighting the Sarge for that gun near the end, but then I remembered that Elite was blue...Very good, hope to read more work from you soon.
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